Wednesday, May 27, 2009

awaak

मैं सोया था इंतजार में कि नींद टूटे, अब जागा तो पाया सब अपने छूटे.
नींद गहरी थी मैं भान ना पाया, परायों की शकल पहचान ना पाया.
अवाक खड़ा चौराहे पर वह कौन है,मैं पूछता मन से- मन मौन हैं.

6 comments:

  1. gr8 mate may ur writingart will be blessed by ma saraswati always


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    ur combination of thinking n writhing iz amazing.its a sensation in itself that gives life in a corpse...........

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  2. grt boss..............
    lage raho.........
    wish u all the best for ur writing.
    keep me updated..........further........

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  3. Itz a beautiful poem....the fact of our life which we dont want to accept.....u have given beautiful words to your thoughts....

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  4. मौन की भाषा सीखनी होगी सत्य जानने के लिए.

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  5. great mind at work.keep it up don't stop keep writing like this,i know u r good but this time u r dam good great thought.i love u beta

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  6. likhte rehna...apni kalam ko kabhi nahi sukhne dena :-)

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